With the newest page done, I've decited to do a couple of edits to previous pages of my comic.
Pages 1 to 3 have been edited slightly in terms of both art and text. I corrected May's hair to look more consistent with the later pages and slightly changed some proportions.
As for text, I changed May's monologue to better reflect her thoughts and mental situation without making her seem too much like a random psycho. Tell me what you think.
Also, I've decided to edit the dimensions of every page of my comic to fit the usual 2:3 ratio for comic books and make the pages look more streamlined. So far only three pages, but my aim is to edit them all and stick to the 2:3 ratio for the rest of the comic.
I'm also working on Polish version of my comic. Once i'm done, I'll be uploading it to DA.